
假定你是李华,你和英国笔友 Chris 正在合作创作一首毕业歌曲。对于歌曲的风格,你们产生了一点分歧。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)说明分歧所在;
(2)表达你的观点并说明理由。
参考范文
Dear Chris,
Regarding the style of our graduation song, we seem to have different preferences. You lean toward a lively pop-rock style, while I think a soft acoustic ballad would be more suitable.
In my opinion, a gentle melody with meaningful lyrics can better express the mixed emotions of graduation—the joy of achievement and the sadness of parting. It invites reflection and touches people's hearts more deeply, which I believe is what a graduation song should do.
What do you think? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【全文翻译】
亲爱的 Chris,
关于我们毕业歌的风格,我们似乎有不同的偏好。你倾向于活泼的流行摇滚风格,而我认为一首轻柔的原声民谣会更合适。
在我看来,柔和的旋律配上富有意义的歌词,能更好地表达毕业时复杂的情感 —— 成就的喜悦和离别的悲伤。它引人深思,更能触动人心,而我认为这正是毕业歌应该做到的。
你怎么看?期待你的回复。
此致李华
【亮点句】
1. You lean toward a lively pop-rock style, while I think a soft acoustic ballad would be more suitable.你倾向于活泼的流行摇滚风格,而我认为一首轻柔的原声民谣会更合适。亮点:“you lean toward...while I think...”清晰对比双方分歧;“lively”与“soft”形成风格上的鲜明对照。
2、In my opinion, a gentle melody with meaningful lyrics can better express the mixed emotions of graduation — the joy of achievement and the sadness of parting.在我看来,柔和的旋律配上富有意义的歌词,能更好地表达毕业时复杂的情感——成就的喜悦和离别的悲伤。亮点:破折号后具体列举两种看似矛盾却共存的情感,精准概括毕业的复杂心境;“mixed emotions”一词概括力强。
3、It invites reflection and touches people's hearts more deeply, which I believe is what a graduation song should do.它引人深思,更能触动人心,而我认为这正是毕业歌应该做到的。亮点:“invites reflection”和“touches people's hearts”表达生动,体现音乐的情感力量;“which I believe…”巧妙融入个人观点,不显生硬。







